This is a lovely form to use when considering man's connections to the natural world. Yours has a lively rhythm, and really made me happy in the reading.
Great! Happy everyone enjoyed it! I will most certainly continue writing tanka poems. I love writing about nature and calmness, and tanka poems seem like a perfect form for it!
a good smile inducing pen, as well - thank you for joining ~
ReplyDeleteThe beauty in nature so aptly shared
ReplyDeleteAh, very satisifying write.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely form to use when considering man's connections to the natural world. Yours has a lively rhythm, and really made me happy in the reading.
ReplyDeleteOpening yourself, being vulnerable to the world .. poetry does have a way of accomplishing that! I enjoyed your tanka.
ReplyDeleteVery nice.. a smile is a blessing
ReplyDeleteGreat! Happy everyone enjoyed it! I will most certainly continue writing tanka poems. I love writing about nature and calmness, and tanka poems seem like a perfect form for it!
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