Sunday, January 19, 2014

Tanka Poetry!

I was introduced to the wonderful tanka poetry from the blog http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/. This is my attempt at this beautiful form!


The towering tree
Cast an expansive shadow
What pleasure to see
Creating smiles for all
Everyone, including me


© 2014 Sean LaSalvia/Poetic Clarity

7 comments:

  1. a good smile inducing pen, as well - thank you for joining ~

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  2. This is a lovely form to use when considering man's connections to the natural world. Yours has a lively rhythm, and really made me happy in the reading.

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  3. Opening yourself, being vulnerable to the world .. poetry does have a way of accomplishing that! I enjoyed your tanka.

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  4. Very nice.. a smile is a blessing

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  5. Great! Happy everyone enjoyed it! I will most certainly continue writing tanka poems. I love writing about nature and calmness, and tanka poems seem like a perfect form for it!

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